for Requiem of the Living9/19/2006 c1 
74Singing After Dark
Beautiful. simply structure but deeper meaning. your rhyme scheme is especially very nice. ding dong is a great way to start and end.
74Singing After DarkBeautiful. simply structure but deeper meaning. your rhyme scheme is especially very nice. ding dong is a great way to start and end.
4/14/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
the imagery in this is amazing - i love 'cherry-apple skies' and 'the deep Chinese Winter'... i love the style as well. great job.
10just a teardropthe imagery in this is amazing - i love 'cherry-apple skies' and 'the deep Chinese Winter'... i love the style as well. great job.
2/16/2006 c1 28pyraverne
Wow. Coolio. Nice and abstract - I like it, I like it! Thanks for the review and plz come back 4 more! -Pyra
28pyraverneWow. Coolio. Nice and abstract - I like it, I like it! Thanks for the review and plz come back 4 more! -Pyra
2/12/2006 c1 1Love-Can-Suck
The story has no true meaning but I'm writing one that's alot like my life story in some ways except my ending turns out differently.I like the poem by the way. It's good.
1Love-Can-SuckThe story has no true meaning but I'm writing one that's alot like my life story in some ways except my ending turns out differently.I like the poem by the way. It's good.
2/9/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The sound and description in this is marvelous. The images corespond so well with the placement. Very well written.
879Moondog DozierThe sound and description in this is marvelous. The images corespond so well with the placement. Very well written.
2/7/2006 c1 19toxic-noodle725
good poem. well written. i wasnt really sure about the message but i loved the rhyming.
19toxic-noodle725good poem. well written. i wasnt really sure about the message but i loved the rhyming.