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6/13/2006 c1 74lacking motivation
perhaps this in one issue that you feel rather strongly about. i like it even if i'm not partial to poems that rhyme. the glories of high school, glad that that's over with now.
3/11/2006 c1 Colin
Good
2/13/2006 c1 acheron love
i swear to goodness. your poems are amazing. and i love how you throw all of it out there, and just pull it in at the end. this is so amazing even if it is a rant.
2/11/2006 c1 237classic violet
Interesting. Great title!
2/9/2006 c1 32Prophetic Vixen
I really like it, but I have one problem with it..."the sluts, the stoners and the drunks" you seem to be implying that it's the girls that are screwing the guys over, not the other way around. Keep that in mind: a guy who gets laid by six different girls is a pimp, he's cool as ice...but the girl? Who did it once with a boy she thought she loved, she's the slut? Sorry, I know you didn't mean it like that, and this is really well written. I like the ABAB rhyming and how consistant it is. Good job.

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