for me talk haiku one day8/9/2006 c12 
55blackpowderchick
do you know what a haiku is?
you cant split words. its not just a sentence cut into syllables.
its a highly intelligent form of writing, much like a sonnet.
wait, you might not have a large enough vocabulary to write either one decently, so i guess i'll lay off and be stupid like other people and say
(THIS) was s o o o good and ((I)) can N O T wait to read *more* of your self-proclaimed -genious
55blackpowderchickdo you know what a haiku is?
you cant split words. its not just a sentence cut into syllables.
its a highly intelligent form of writing, much like a sonnet.
wait, you might not have a large enough vocabulary to write either one decently, so i guess i'll lay off and be stupid like other people and say
(THIS) was s o o o good and ((I)) can N O T wait to read *more* of your self-proclaimed -genious
2/17/2006 c1 24InspirASIAN
have fun? okay.
i didnt join FP 4 "false compliments"
1. ppl actually liked my work
2. i joined 'cuz (gasp, i sed 'cuz instead of 'cause, o plz dont criticize me) i like to write FOR FUN
o, and that evolution statement, i dont give a crap, i dont blieve in that u cant blieve im 13? then get ready to b amazed
btw, if ya' havent noticed, just bcuz (o look, i sed it again) i dont like seeing wut i did wrong (i dont like making mistakes, big whoop) doesnt mean if sum1 points 1 out i dont learn 4rm it
cuz if u re-read the poems u critiqued then u'll c i fixed it
o, thats fine if u want 2 learn wut u did wrong
but news flash
i dont care about YOUR learning
"yeah, your just a username person on the computer, but nobody likes to get bad comments. you probably dont either. so just tone it down a little"
exact words i wanted 2 say but sum1 else got 2 them...but i still need 2 put them up 4 my own reasons
i may b acting immature, especially wen i say this
"u started it"
24InspirASIANhave fun? okay.
i didnt join FP 4 "false compliments"
1. ppl actually liked my work
2. i joined 'cuz (gasp, i sed 'cuz instead of 'cause, o plz dont criticize me) i like to write FOR FUN
o, and that evolution statement, i dont give a crap, i dont blieve in that u cant blieve im 13? then get ready to b amazed
btw, if ya' havent noticed, just bcuz (o look, i sed it again) i dont like seeing wut i did wrong (i dont like making mistakes, big whoop) doesnt mean if sum1 points 1 out i dont learn 4rm it
cuz if u re-read the poems u critiqued then u'll c i fixed it
o, thats fine if u want 2 learn wut u did wrong
but news flash
i dont care about YOUR learning
"yeah, your just a username person on the computer, but nobody likes to get bad comments. you probably dont either. so just tone it down a little"
exact words i wanted 2 say but sum1 else got 2 them...but i still need 2 put them up 4 my own reasons
i may b acting immature, especially wen i say this
"u started it"
2/10/2006 c3 19Kat-Renee Kittel
Cats like kissing too. My cat kept licking my face last night and wouldn't quit. I had to pull the covers over my head. the editor thingy messed up. start here. laughsafely.bravehost.com and go to agape is a 5 letter word.
^..^
19Kat-Renee KittelCats like kissing too. My cat kept licking my face last night and wouldn't quit. I had to pull the covers over my head. the editor thingy messed up. start here. laughsafely.bravehost.com and go to agape is a 5 letter word.
^..^
2/10/2006 c2 Kat-Renee Kittel
This funny...
Oh, may I please post Confessions of the Literal Minded in my Editorial Column - Agape Is A Five Letter Word?
w.agapeischutzpah.blogspot.comw.laughsafely.bravehost.com
I would have asked inside the reviews for the poem, but it thinks I reviewed already... can't tell you why it would do that yet... tell ya later if you write me back.
Thanks ^..^
This funny...
Oh, may I please post Confessions of the Literal Minded in my Editorial Column - Agape Is A Five Letter Word?
w.agapeischutzpah.blogspot.comw.laughsafely.bravehost.com
I would have asked inside the reviews for the poem, but it thinks I reviewed already... can't tell you why it would do that yet... tell ya later if you write me back.
Thanks ^..^
2/8/2006 c9 hey maria
At first I was all 'WTF THIS ISN'T A HAIKU' and I was going to bitch at you but then I realized admire has three syllables.
At first I was all 'WTF THIS ISN'T A HAIKU' and I was going to bitch at you but then I realized admire has three syllables.