for The Painting8/29/2006 c1 
34Skiv
Ah! This is brillant! I've come to love repeitivness in poems, for some reason. I think it often gets the point across well. I love this with spades, because they're better than hearts.
~`Skiv
34SkivAh! This is brillant! I've come to love repeitivness in poems, for some reason. I think it often gets the point across well. I love this with spades, because they're better than hearts.
~`Skiv
2/13/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
Wow. that was just... wow. Amazing from start to finish; you never faultered. The rhythem was perfect, and just the originality of the overall theme... Very nice.
194Aslan IsraelWow. that was just... wow. Amazing from start to finish; you never faultered. The rhythem was perfect, and just the originality of the overall theme... Very nice.
2/9/2006 c1 29Lemon Blue
Really like this. Very well discribed. Good job. I like the last two lines. Very nice.
Lemon Blue
29Lemon BlueReally like this. Very well discribed. Good job. I like the last two lines. Very nice.
Lemon Blue
2/8/2006 c1 9Asenka.N.Chernyaeva
Wow! Just...wow! That was an amazing poem! You utilized repetition amazingly well to make the words flow together perfectly. I'm putting it on favorites! Great job!
9Asenka.N.ChernyaevaWow! Just...wow! That was an amazing poem! You utilized repetition amazingly well to make the words flow together perfectly. I'm putting it on favorites! Great job!