for Isabel11/25/2010 c6 
2WinterInk24
Ya. They finally met. At least she didn't see him caked in human blood and dirt. Ya for pool caves. Repeat. I repeat, excellent writing. Am in love with your story.
2WinterInk24Ya. They finally met. At least she didn't see him caked in human blood and dirt. Ya for pool caves. Repeat. I repeat, excellent writing. Am in love with your story.
11/25/2010 c5 WinterInk24
:O Jodei in an abusive relationship? I never thought of that. She always seem the quiet and shy sister. But wow. And I'm so sad about Ganice and Desi. Wow. That family cannot get a happy moment.
:O Jodei in an abusive relationship? I never thought of that. She always seem the quiet and shy sister. But wow. And I'm so sad about Ganice and Desi. Wow. That family cannot get a happy moment.
11/25/2010 c4 WinterInk24
Again amazing imagery. There might be too many longish length paragraphs. Made it hard for me to truly focus on each sentence because there were so many long paragraphs.
Again amazing imagery. There might be too many longish length paragraphs. Made it hard for me to truly focus on each sentence because there were so many long paragraphs.
11/24/2010 c3 WinterInk24
Damn. You sure know how to hold the attention of a reader. Now I have to know what the sisters are mourning. Story is amazing. Wondering when Belle gets some action
Damn. You sure know how to hold the attention of a reader. Now I have to know what the sisters are mourning. Story is amazing. Wondering when Belle gets some action
11/24/2010 c2 WinterInk24
Woah. Such vivid imagery with how the mother died in that scene. So much angst in the beginning chapters! I love it :D Hope to see some lightening up of atmosphere later on.
Woah. Such vivid imagery with how the mother died in that scene. So much angst in the beginning chapters! I love it :D Hope to see some lightening up of atmosphere later on.
11/24/2010 c1 WinterInk24
Aw...I smell tragedy coming. Poor Belle for being a reminder of her mother's death in the eyes of her father. Also excellent writing. Its so easy for me to get lost in your writing.
Aw...I smell tragedy coming. Poor Belle for being a reminder of her mother's death in the eyes of her father. Also excellent writing. Its so easy for me to get lost in your writing.
11/24/2010 c7 WinterInk24
O-O NO. I died a little inside when I saw that there weren't anymore chapters. Seriously, you write so well. This is excellent quality writing. Which you haven't updated for four years. :( I'm sad. Your characters are interesting and come from intriguing backgrounds. I am so looking forward to see how they interact together. Please. Please update soon!
O-O NO. I died a little inside when I saw that there weren't anymore chapters. Seriously, you write so well. This is excellent quality writing. Which you haven't updated for four years. :( I'm sad. Your characters are interesting and come from intriguing backgrounds. I am so looking forward to see how they interact together. Please. Please update soon!
10/4/2009 c1 Keldrena
I read this story back before you removed it and started rewriting it. I miss it. I really hope you're are okay and that you update soon. This is probably useless, but I thought I'd write it anyway.
I read this story back before you removed it and started rewriting it. I miss it. I really hope you're are okay and that you update soon. This is probably useless, but I thought I'd write it anyway.
8/1/2009 c7 6Disneyjunkie13
Great Story! Love it soo far. Please continue it. I love the twist to the characters. Keep the good work up.
6Disneyjunkie13Great Story! Love it soo far. Please continue it. I love the twist to the characters. Keep the good work up.
5/3/2009 c7 4Green Sea Blossom
PLEASE UPDATE THIS! This is a REALLY well written story, and I love the plot and the characters! PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE!(T.T)
4Green Sea BlossomPLEASE UPDATE THIS! This is a REALLY well written story, and I love the plot and the characters! PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE!(T.T)
6/23/2007 c1 Manda
I read your story for the third time. It's still lovely. I cna't wait til you update.
I read your story for the third time. It's still lovely. I cna't wait til you update.
1/28/2007 c7 Manda
I hope you update soon.
I hope you update soon.
1/19/2007 c7 yi
please update soon!
pretty please?
please update soon!
pretty please?