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6/21/2010 c1 12macabre thoughts
This is epic. I like the way it tells a different story with every line.
6/16/2006 c1 33WyrdWolf
Lol...I think I cut my tongue from saying all the 'th' sounds (I mouth stuff when I read it). Cool poem, though. With a reference to Gundam, nothing can be bad!

Anyway, about the Rapunzel name thing...it's a nickname for me that developed in a volley of e-mails between Felicia and I. AT one point she said that I could 'spin a wicked tale.' and I said 'well, call me Rapunzel.' And now she does. Go figure. It's a fun name, though.

Thanks for the super-huge review on My View Of The World! I'll try to be diligent about writing it!
3/12/2006 c1 1Icuras

The more I read your stuff, the more I enjoy it.
3/3/2006 c1 6grafiti rtk
Lol.. great poem. I just did the nervous system in school, so I appreciate the lines about dendrites and stuff. Good content, and amazing alliterations.
2/24/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This is wonderfully well woven and an interesting read. Quite funny. Well done.
2/12/2006 c1 7Teufel66
"like a blonde through football teams" lol hilarious. I like this, the ending was quite unexpected.
2/12/2006 c1 archived
teeheehee...thinking can be hazardous to your health!

nice rhymes, that was enjoyable to read.

2/10/2006 c1 63Disturbing Enigma
Haha, I like this. I loved the simile "like a blonde through football teams." Keep up the good work.
2/10/2006 c1 10Almah
HA, that's wonderful. I'm so jealous of people who can actually rhyme in poetry without making it sound cheesy, but you sound very natural. Good job. :-)

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