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2/13/2006 c1 90Raven's Pen
Same complaints as in the other two pieces. Your sentences are just about all runons, showing a -very- basic lack of literate comprehension. Your punctuation isnot only awful as far as seperating sentences from eachother. Within the sentences, you omit semi-colons, commas and quotations where needed. It reads like a stream of conciousness piece, but has little context or content to make up for it. I hate to say it, but I really didn't find anything positive about your piece. Maybe if I could have remotely understood what you were saying, I could give it a kudo or two. Overall, awful.

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