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2/13/2006 c1 goddessofmoondreams
I like the way this is written, almost like a rant. Beautiful imagery and wording. I wish I knew a place like that too.
2/13/2006 c1 5Mad Asher
Turn off caps too many capitalized letters, they burn my eyes!

Literally. Raven's pen is leaving nice reviews, ones WORTHY of your time. Heed them, since you got no other MATURE reviews. (Oh diss!)

Anyway, I would agree with Raven's Pen on that this is not even a poem, it sucks hell, and your work is thoroughly dissapointing. Go fuck yourself.

P.S sorry for language, but you disgust me.
2/13/2006 c1 90Raven's Pen
The capitalization takes away from the whole thing because it is like you are trying to scream your message at the reader. Reading through it, the tone of the poem was fairly tranquil, so the "I'm screaming at you" capitalization is in complete contradiction to your message. Wait. What is your message, exactly? The last sentence makes no sense at all "What might be real to you might not be real to you" ?

Putting in a review on your own work saying how great it is not only makes you sound idiotic, but childish.

I was thoroughly disappointed reading this and your other work.
2/10/2006 c1 9Tycko Hurley
I LOVE THIS POEM AND I HOPE YOU DO TOO

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