for just wishing2/14/2006 c1 lioness
beatiful, darling. just beautiful. lovely imagery. it was cool and sweet. i know how you feel. it all comes from (eating honey) i mean hating school.love lioness
beatiful, darling. just beautiful. lovely imagery. it was cool and sweet. i know how you feel. it all comes from (eating honey) i mean hating school.love lioness
2/11/2006 c1 
90Dragonzz
I like the format of this. It makes it MUCH more interesting to read. And I like the lines, "I’ll d r i n k rosesand eat sunshine," I love those lines!
~dragonzz~
90DragonzzI like the format of this. It makes it MUCH more interesting to read. And I like the lines, "I’ll d r i n k rosesand eat sunshine," I love those lines!
~dragonzz~
2/11/2006 c1 90Raven's Pen
in my personal opinion, poetry really needs to be about the words and the language. putting in bolds and italics and spaces and underlines just shows that you can't get a message across without using those. they really handicapp the person to someone who is reading it. I think it would be a hundred times better if you found a way to convey the message you want to without using all of the non-literary devices
90Raven's Penin my personal opinion, poetry really needs to be about the words and the language. putting in bolds and italics and spaces and underlines just shows that you can't get a message across without using those. they really handicapp the person to someone who is reading it. I think it would be a hundred times better if you found a way to convey the message you want to without using all of the non-literary devices
2/11/2006 c1 337Luthiena o Lorien
"I’ll d r i n k rosesand eat sunshine" Love those liens.
Oh, such a sense of yearning in it, with a subtle undertone of hatred. Brilliant job!
337Luthiena o Lorien"I’ll d r i n k rosesand eat sunshine" Love those liens.
Oh, such a sense of yearning in it, with a subtle undertone of hatred. Brilliant job!