for the red stain that will never fade4/5/2006 c1 
19wonderland is different now
okay, so i DONT listen. its a problem. but i havent had much but encouraging reviews for that stuff lately ;) so i was quite happy to continue, as well as adding the factor of extreme to ultimate boredom. sorry. but what i DONT know why and you DONT tell me, is why im on ur favs, if u hate my writing so much...? could you please explain? thanks. i would appreciate it.
and nice poem. the end was a funny twist.
19wonderland is different nowokay, so i DONT listen. its a problem. but i havent had much but encouraging reviews for that stuff lately ;) so i was quite happy to continue, as well as adding the factor of extreme to ultimate boredom. sorry. but what i DONT know why and you DONT tell me, is why im on ur favs, if u hate my writing so much...? could you please explain? thanks. i would appreciate it.
and nice poem. the end was a funny twist.
3/12/2006 c1 41But I Die Without You
At the risk of flaming, may I just say that this poem was a complete waste of the reader's time? Thank you.
41But I Die Without YouAt the risk of flaming, may I just say that this poem was a complete waste of the reader's time? Thank you.
2/14/2006 c1 euphemismsforlukewarmtragedies
i was never a fan of rhyming poetry.& after reading this,i'm still not a fan.
usually, i don't respond to hostile reviews, but either i'm just in an exceptionally bad mood, or you just happen to be special.
1) i know how to type properly, thanks. whether i choose to leave my letters uncapitalized is not an indication of my inability to type, it's a choice. you'll find that many on this site choose not to capitalize. "don't randomlybold a sentence," you said. well i throw back at you not to randomly underline a sentence. i know ther are no underlines in this piece, but i perused something else of yours with underlines. hypocritical much?
2) "If this is supposed to be a poem, you're in the wrong section." exercise a little modesty. you're not as intelligent as your arrogance warrants. it wasn't poetry, hence it wasn't under poetry.
3) "This is pointless." well thank you for your opinion. i wont refute it. "Otherwise, this is just confusing, without any beginning or ending, and is pointless." maybe you haven't noticed, but not everything requires a rigid structure like your rigid self seems to want. some people are more intelligent than to require a a step-by-step "let's spell the plot slowly for retards"
oh & by the way, your poem was pointless.
i was never a fan of rhyming poetry.& after reading this,i'm still not a fan.
usually, i don't respond to hostile reviews, but either i'm just in an exceptionally bad mood, or you just happen to be special.
1) i know how to type properly, thanks. whether i choose to leave my letters uncapitalized is not an indication of my inability to type, it's a choice. you'll find that many on this site choose not to capitalize. "don't randomlybold a sentence," you said. well i throw back at you not to randomly underline a sentence. i know ther are no underlines in this piece, but i perused something else of yours with underlines. hypocritical much?
2) "If this is supposed to be a poem, you're in the wrong section." exercise a little modesty. you're not as intelligent as your arrogance warrants. it wasn't poetry, hence it wasn't under poetry.
3) "This is pointless." well thank you for your opinion. i wont refute it. "Otherwise, this is just confusing, without any beginning or ending, and is pointless." maybe you haven't noticed, but not everything requires a rigid structure like your rigid self seems to want. some people are more intelligent than to require a a step-by-step "let's spell the plot slowly for retards"
oh & by the way, your poem was pointless.