for just another victim11/8/2006 c1 
243ShadowFane
Nicely done. I like your poetry quite a bit. You keep impressing me like this, and you're going to find yourself on my favorite authors list, whether you want to be there or not.
SF
243ShadowFaneNicely done. I like your poetry quite a bit. You keep impressing me like this, and you're going to find yourself on my favorite authors list, whether you want to be there or not.
SF
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
I think the italics/bold/underlined is a bit overdone, and may take away a bit from the poem. Usually the word art is interesting, but in this it ios a bit distracting. Good effort and great poem! Please continue to write!
41sarah1491I think the italics/bold/underlined is a bit overdone, and may take away a bit from the poem. Usually the word art is interesting, but in this it ios a bit distracting. Good effort and great poem! Please continue to write!
8/9/2006 c1 55blackpowderchick
people like you never cease to amuse or amaze me.
it is obvious from your writings, and yes i have read more than one, that you COULD actually write. you have the mindset, the word play, etc., yet you only use it to hurt others.
if you don't like reading others poems, then take this suggestion: don't. If you don't want to know about other people's problems, then dont read about them. That is simple and easy, and i think even you can handle that.
For the record: my best friend killed himself last year. He wrote on this site daily. It really did keep him alive for almost 3 years, and guess what pushed him over the edge? Some jackass (not you, thank god, or i would fucking hunt you down and kill you), left a flame on what he considered his "masterpiece." it was a novel he was writing and updated the chapters daily.
consider that when you are leaving uneducated reviews, because you really could push someone over the edge. dont mock those you won't ever (and most likely couldn't ever) understand.
The review you left on my poem, silent words, is so ironic... "Your choice of words is not too terrible, but the forced rhymes kind of takeaway things. This could have been a better poem if you don't try to rhyme." Yet this poem is published, not once, not twice, THREE times in three different literary magazines.
keep up the pathetic work, but save the world from your obviously uneducated, unneccessary, and unworthy reviews. (were any of those words too big? let me paraphrase: you're stupid, stop being an asshole, you aren't worth any writer's time.)
~blackpowderchic
55blackpowderchickpeople like you never cease to amuse or amaze me.
it is obvious from your writings, and yes i have read more than one, that you COULD actually write. you have the mindset, the word play, etc., yet you only use it to hurt others.
if you don't like reading others poems, then take this suggestion: don't. If you don't want to know about other people's problems, then dont read about them. That is simple and easy, and i think even you can handle that.
For the record: my best friend killed himself last year. He wrote on this site daily. It really did keep him alive for almost 3 years, and guess what pushed him over the edge? Some jackass (not you, thank god, or i would fucking hunt you down and kill you), left a flame on what he considered his "masterpiece." it was a novel he was writing and updated the chapters daily.
consider that when you are leaving uneducated reviews, because you really could push someone over the edge. dont mock those you won't ever (and most likely couldn't ever) understand.
The review you left on my poem, silent words, is so ironic... "Your choice of words is not too terrible, but the forced rhymes kind of takeaway things. This could have been a better poem if you don't try to rhyme." Yet this poem is published, not once, not twice, THREE times in three different literary magazines.
keep up the pathetic work, but save the world from your obviously uneducated, unneccessary, and unworthy reviews. (were any of those words too big? let me paraphrase: you're stupid, stop being an asshole, you aren't worth any writer's time.)
~blackpowderchic
6/9/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
This was wonderful!
I love how you did this, and the way you formatted it! Great job! I'm adding you to my faves!
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
87Chaos AppleThis was wonderful!
I love how you did this, and the way you formatted it! Great job! I'm adding you to my faves!
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
3/22/2006 c1 60dollface and her cancer
Totally not digging the formatting; it seems to be, somewhat, a poem without a purpose. I'm sort of hoping you're being sarcastic.
60dollface and her cancerTotally not digging the formatting; it seems to be, somewhat, a poem without a purpose. I'm sort of hoping you're being sarcastic.
3/5/2006 c1 20are you from mejico
Hnn. Yea. I don't know how to feel about this. Feels like you'd be nicer to people who were doing the abusing as opposed to those who were abused because at least the first didn't whine about it?
20are you from mejicoHnn. Yea. I don't know how to feel about this. Feels like you'd be nicer to people who were doing the abusing as opposed to those who were abused because at least the first didn't whine about it?
2/13/2006 c1 hey maria
Oh. Uh. Well. I disagree with cigarette cliche b/c I've read the "flames" you left other people and it was just constructive criticism and a whole lot of sarcasm. C'mon. Sarcasm's not bad. "Piss up a flagpole and then rape it you shiteater-cockmaster. This is complete garbage and should be removed at once for it's lack of everything that makes a poem a poem. When big daddy comes home to hit and fuck you naked you'll regret writing this, I'll call him now since I work with your dad and he tells me all of it."
Oh. Uh. Well. I disagree with cigarette cliche b/c I've read the "flames" you left other people and it was just constructive criticism and a whole lot of sarcasm. C'mon. Sarcasm's not bad. "Piss up a flagpole and then rape it you shiteater-cockmaster. This is complete garbage and should be removed at once for it's lack of everything that makes a poem a poem. When big daddy comes home to hit and fuck you naked you'll regret writing this, I'll call him now since I work with your dad and he tells me all of it."
2/12/2006 c1 55ronshaberry
Woo hoo to fictionpress, the place where all the depressed angsty teenagers accumulate in a puddle of terrifying misery!
55ronshaberryWoo hoo to fictionpress, the place where all the depressed angsty teenagers accumulate in a puddle of terrifying misery!
2/12/2006 c1 81thursdays and rain
oi bay, wala jud kay lingaw noh? kung wala kay lingaw, ayaw nalang ug pangamong ug laing tao. naluoy nalang ko nimo da.
don't worry, you'll live c:
81thursdays and rainoi bay, wala jud kay lingaw noh? kung wala kay lingaw, ayaw nalang ug pangamong ug laing tao. naluoy nalang ko nimo da.
don't worry, you'll live c:
2/12/2006 c1 14kit feral
I'm sorry, I thought we'd talked about this? I was under the impression you actually had SOME maturity, guess I was wrong.
So if you think this place is obviously so stupid (and, god, there really are some serious writers here, don't put us all in the same catagory) why are you here?
I can't say anything nice about this. I'm sorry, I'd like to, because I hate flaming. I'm not one of those people that says they hate flamers and then go flame the flamers. It's stupid. But in your case... this is insensitive, pointless.
I don't know if I should pity you for obviously having way too much time on your hands, or be childish like everyone else and hate you. I guess I'm just going to sit here and be surprised.
Honestly, what is this place coming to? I remember when it was a place for WRITERS. Writing is my life and this site is my world- this is not something you should be doing just 'cause you're bored. This place actually means something to some people. Obviously you don't take it seriously at all, but I do.
I'm not going to report you. Yet. But, please, get your act together. Some of your work actually has potential. Not this, of course. But the one I read before- yeah, it was decent. Why don't you just write seriously and stop the flaming? It makes you look really pathetic. Just a suggestion, because I actually care. Why else would I waste my time on this? Call me stupid, I don't care, but conflict bothers me. Especially when it's obviously hurting people.
I'm sure you think I sound like somebody's mother, but I guess it doesn't matter because from the looks of your bio you don't like me already. Geez, do you like anyone? Uh, sorry I'm a teenager, I guess...
14kit feralI'm sorry, I thought we'd talked about this? I was under the impression you actually had SOME maturity, guess I was wrong.
So if you think this place is obviously so stupid (and, god, there really are some serious writers here, don't put us all in the same catagory) why are you here?
I can't say anything nice about this. I'm sorry, I'd like to, because I hate flaming. I'm not one of those people that says they hate flamers and then go flame the flamers. It's stupid. But in your case... this is insensitive, pointless.
I don't know if I should pity you for obviously having way too much time on your hands, or be childish like everyone else and hate you. I guess I'm just going to sit here and be surprised.
Honestly, what is this place coming to? I remember when it was a place for WRITERS. Writing is my life and this site is my world- this is not something you should be doing just 'cause you're bored. This place actually means something to some people. Obviously you don't take it seriously at all, but I do.
I'm not going to report you. Yet. But, please, get your act together. Some of your work actually has potential. Not this, of course. But the one I read before- yeah, it was decent. Why don't you just write seriously and stop the flaming? It makes you look really pathetic. Just a suggestion, because I actually care. Why else would I waste my time on this? Call me stupid, I don't care, but conflict bothers me. Especially when it's obviously hurting people.
I'm sure you think I sound like somebody's mother, but I guess it doesn't matter because from the looks of your bio you don't like me already. Geez, do you like anyone? Uh, sorry I'm a teenager, I guess...