for the majestic poem that makes no sense8/26/2007 c1 
6Dreamof-Roses
very rhythmic and imaginative - i actually get an image of a beautiful, yet fiercely angry creature with golden wings...
shimmering thinly llke melted caramel.
intriguing poem! Thanks for sharing, Katie Kat.
6Dreamof-Rosesvery rhythmic and imaginative - i actually get an image of a beautiful, yet fiercely angry creature with golden wings...
shimmering thinly llke melted caramel.
intriguing poem! Thanks for sharing, Katie Kat.
11/16/2006 c1 1fairyxflames
good job
i dont get the "caramel hunger"
but the other adjectives have nice tones
1fairyxflamesgood job
i dont get the "caramel hunger"
but the other adjectives have nice tones
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Well, the title says it all! No, I'm joking. I liked it, even if it made little sense. The italics gave it a great effect; that "majestic" feeling you were going for really showed through. Nicely done, again, even if you think there is not much sense to it. I still like it. :)
41sarah1491Well, the title says it all! No, I'm joking. I liked it, even if it made little sense. The italics gave it a great effect; that "majestic" feeling you were going for really showed through. Nicely done, again, even if you think there is not much sense to it. I still like it. :)
5/6/2006 c1 29Katterree Fengari
makes me what to go "aww, poor baby"
lovely imagery by the way. "Caramel anger" is curious. Nice parody
29Katterree Fengarimakes me what to go "aww, poor baby"
lovely imagery by the way. "Caramel anger" is curious. Nice parody
3/19/2006 c1 87youzi
basically the title captures it all..but i love the honesty.i also love the fact that you tried to implement a rhyme scheme in this piece...it flows well, to say the least. do keep writing :D
87youzibasically the title captures it all..but i love the honesty.i also love the fact that you tried to implement a rhyme scheme in this piece...it flows well, to say the least. do keep writing :D
3/9/2006 c1 nofaceme
ya know what. I don't hate you. so I read some more. Just for you. And this..wasn't too bad. I like it more than that "other" stuff. It just flows better. "hope stained glory" was a good line. I'll give ya that. Just...be nicer to people! I would be your friend if you were nice. ^_^ And if you speak german too, that would be cool. B/c I love german.
ya know what. I don't hate you. so I read some more. Just for you. And this..wasn't too bad. I like it more than that "other" stuff. It just flows better. "hope stained glory" was a good line. I'll give ya that. Just...be nicer to people! I would be your friend if you were nice. ^_^ And if you speak german too, that would be cool. B/c I love german.
3/8/2006 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Ah, but it does have a meaning. I like the rhyming in this, and the images, as noted in your title, are rather majestic: "Suffocating in the darkness / That burns ashes and drops acid rain." Very nice.
Ah, but it does have a meaning. I like the rhyming in this, and the images, as noted in your title, are rather majestic: "Suffocating in the darkness / That burns ashes and drops acid rain." Very nice.
2/28/2006 c1 162setne
I found this interesting, in a good way. Though I have my doubts about the title, I like the content. Well written!
162setneI found this interesting, in a good way. Though I have my doubts about the title, I like the content. Well written!
2/13/2006 c1 hey maria
Uh. Unlike the other two reviewers, I'm more inclined to read this as a satire? With the title and the summary I would think so...
Anyway. This poem is full of "beautiful" phrases like "hope-stained glory" and "burns ashes and drops acid rain" but it doesn't really say anything. If it WAS a satire, good job. If not, I'm disappointed in you. :P
Uh. Unlike the other two reviewers, I'm more inclined to read this as a satire? With the title and the summary I would think so...
Anyway. This poem is full of "beautiful" phrases like "hope-stained glory" and "burns ashes and drops acid rain" but it doesn't really say anything. If it WAS a satire, good job. If not, I'm disappointed in you. :P
2/12/2006 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
caramel anger would be hot caramel, just melting hot and sticky all over, maybe?
Hard to get a fix on the picture being painted, save the word-betrayal feels like this...
Oh, Confessions of the Literal Minded is up on my blog now. If you go to my profile and click on my home page... It will take you there. And yes it has your copyright and pen name and everything.
Thanks for letting me share one of your best works to a new audience of folks. -Reni. ^..^
19Kat-Renee Kittelcaramel anger would be hot caramel, just melting hot and sticky all over, maybe?
Hard to get a fix on the picture being painted, save the word-betrayal feels like this...
Oh, Confessions of the Literal Minded is up on my blog now. If you go to my profile and click on my home page... It will take you there. And yes it has your copyright and pen name and everything.
Thanks for letting me share one of your best works to a new audience of folks. -Reni. ^..^
2/12/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
Pretty. "Caramel anger." O. That's really cool. I liked that phrase the best but your other ones were just as great. Your poem is so beautiful...but obviously in a sad (literally) way. Awesome job!
16brokendreams21Pretty. "Caramel anger." O. That's really cool. I liked that phrase the best but your other ones were just as great. Your poem is so beautiful...but obviously in a sad (literally) way. Awesome job!