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12/15/2006 c1 65Continuation
*sigh* I know that feeling too. It's like everything they do gets magnified a million times in your own eyes when to them it's just another gesture, another brush against the arm or another random smile. I know what it feels like to stay up all night thinking about that someone, knowing that there's no way anything's going to happen even when you close your eyes and picture it happening right in front of you. I know what it feels like to be distracted from the world for hours because you can't stop thinking about that person. It sucks.

This has a really great idea behind it but it's too informal. Suggestion: make it into a story of some kind. It's easiest to write about something like this when you feel it so strongly. Who knows, maybe your characters will have better luck?
3/24/2006 c1 baby
i like this. but i hate that feeling.

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