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2/7/2007 c1 Cobster
Hooray for scenery. I loved this poem.
3/20/2006 c1 13shutupcharlotte
childen are fountains of unknown wisdom

i miss the innocence

beautiful peom, beautiful lessons
2/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a nostalgic tone that enhances the images in this work. The personalization helped to carry the narrative as it made it truly relatable as an every kids story, but unique in the same breath. Good write.
2/12/2006 c1 16arwenwasframed
beautiful...I love this poem, especially the way you used little kids games to reveal larger truths about life. Well done!~arwenwasframed~
2/12/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
interesting~ reminds me of childhood... good poem

keep writing!

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