for Semiprecious Love6/7/2006 c1 nofaceme
very interesting. I love how all the different stones are weaved into this. ^_^ very fun to try and find all of tehm. I like the line about glasses. Keep it up.
very interesting. I love how all the different stones are weaved into this. ^_^ very fun to try and find all of tehm. I like the line about glasses. Keep it up.
4/4/2006 c1 
69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
I love your use of stones/gems to get the colors across, i can see it in my mind, the images are vivid. I absolutely adore the last line.
69til-iburnout aka Amanda HeltonI love your use of stones/gems to get the colors across, i can see it in my mind, the images are vivid. I absolutely adore the last line.
3/22/2006 c1 79Spare Change
I am a sucker for poetry that I can't initially understand because of lovely metaphors. Hehe. So very elegant! Nice nice :)
79Spare ChangeI am a sucker for poetry that I can't initially understand because of lovely metaphors. Hehe. So very elegant! Nice nice :)
3/3/2006 c1 a lonely september
'Skin untouched. You made me bleed Emerald, Sapphire, Topaz,
Nearly a million shades freshly carved in flesh.'that was just gorgeous and so was the last line. you did a brilliant job on this.
'Skin untouched. You made me bleed Emerald, Sapphire, Topaz,
Nearly a million shades freshly carved in flesh.'that was just gorgeous and so was the last line. you did a brilliant job on this.
2/16/2006 c1 75Carp
There's an honest twist in each stanza. "You broke my glasses telling me you didn’t suit a Rose
Quartz tint, Hidden Truth just wasn’t your colour."
I liked those two lines. Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Your poetry is well written. :)
75CarpThere's an honest twist in each stanza. "You broke my glasses telling me you didn’t suit a Rose
Quartz tint, Hidden Truth just wasn’t your colour."
I liked those two lines. Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Your poetry is well written. :)
2/16/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
The first line is confusing. Perhaps add a comma?
But I love how all the stones are interwoven. Brilliant
48VyvyanThe first line is confusing. Perhaps add a comma?
But I love how all the stones are interwoven. Brilliant
2/14/2006 c1 31none of burt's beeswax
I love(d) "our skins still weeping/diamond drop pure passion tears." This is gorgeous and the twist at the end is absolutely cruel, darling. Lovely.
31none of burt's beeswaxI love(d) "our skins still weeping/diamond drop pure passion tears." This is gorgeous and the twist at the end is absolutely cruel, darling. Lovely.
2/14/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Excellent end line. Very colorful and well placed imagery throughout. Kind of a swirling semi-reality. Very well written and unique.
879Moondog DozierExcellent end line. Very colorful and well placed imagery throughout. Kind of a swirling semi-reality. Very well written and unique.