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2/18/2006 c1 4Mr. Dan Bayfield
Short and sweet. (Well, not really SWEET, but good.) It all worked, except for maybe the lines about orphans/the lonely and thirst/cursed. Otherwise I have to criticism.

~MDB
2/17/2006 c1 7Teufel66
Wow, this is very interesting. These questions are striking and powerful. I enjoyed this.

-Teufel
2/16/2006 c1 36MC Brooks
Thanks for the review. Yeah, I've heard of RATM. I enjoy their music alot. I've heard that it's very RATM-esque. Then again, alot of my stuff is. I draw some influence from them. You should check out some of my other political songs.

This is a really interesting poem. It's good I like it.
2/13/2006 c1 32MandeeSippingTea
interesting, what made you write this? I am curious to know.

Nice work.
2/13/2006 c1 3JadieRose
I love it. The whole simplicity of it is definatley what gives it its power- its so emotional, and so true. We live in a terrible, devil-possessed world.

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