3/24/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
Lets get burnt tonight...Let's

I totally agree with the a/n at the end... very cool and powerful metaphor.. I like it a lot.. I would make them either all burnt or burned and not switch...oh and I really love those last 2 stanzas

2/13/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
fir is an interesting subject~ it can symbolize so much~~ great job!

keep writing!