
3/7/2006 c1 Jana
jebus! really related to that one! alot of clever metaphors! fair play keep up the entertainment! x x x luvya x x x
jebus! really related to that one! alot of clever metaphors! fair play keep up the entertainment! x x x luvya x x x
2/23/2006 c1
51Kusje
I really do love your tempo of your poems. You have a unique style. I love it. Great job once again.

I really do love your tempo of your poems. You have a unique style. I love it. Great job once again.
2/19/2006 c1
298Moon-Chaser
Wow, so deep full on imagery and feeling. The ending is was I liked the most.
Keep it up.

Wow, so deep full on imagery and feeling. The ending is was I liked the most.
Keep it up.
2/16/2006 c1
60Rosanna28
This is really deep Alex. And well detailed. I love it, it's so beautiful! Lets talk soon!
Love ya, Rosanna.

This is really deep Alex. And well detailed. I love it, it's so beautiful! Lets talk soon!
Love ya, Rosanna.
2/14/2006 c1 arcane devices
my god... While I was gone on my three month hiatus, I come back and see that your writing has matured...a lot. You get better with each and every piece, expecting nothing less the next time.
- ADD-san
my god... While I was gone on my three month hiatus, I come back and see that your writing has matured...a lot. You get better with each and every piece, expecting nothing less the next time.
- ADD-san
2/14/2006 c1
115HauntedMisery
This is a great poem, you did so well on it, its amazing, excellent job!

This is a great poem, you did so well on it, its amazing, excellent job!
2/14/2006 c1
18twistedtruths
brillant poem alex. the wordchose is so beautiful and it pops out at me. i loved it. keep writing.

brillant poem alex. the wordchose is so beautiful and it pops out at me. i loved it. keep writing.
2/14/2006 c1 dancingintherain
i really love it...its beautiful and i cannot almost relate...the words just really bring me there and your questions had me thinking...well done,
i really love it...its beautiful and i cannot almost relate...the words just really bring me there and your questions had me thinking...well done,