for this void is s u c k i n g MY soul9/1/2011 c1 
19Dog Scepters
I like the rage...
But I don't think some the format is necessary. What are the the brackets and the underline supposed to do for the reader. Stress? And "ASSHOLE" looks like an abbreviation. No rhyming, just anger.
19Dog SceptersI like the rage...
But I don't think some the format is necessary. What are the the brackets and the underline supposed to do for the reader. Stress? And "ASSHOLE" looks like an abbreviation. No rhyming, just anger.
12/15/2007 c1 19wonderland is different now
Ohmydearieme.
And you used to yell at me for formatting?
Tsk, tsk.
Nah. I love the words. Very..out there.
Gorgeous language usage, and the like.
As hypocritical as it may seem?
Loosen up on the formatting.
Sprinkle it in, don't douse the pretty piece.
It'd help.
19wonderland is different nowOhmydearieme.
And you used to yell at me for formatting?
Tsk, tsk.
Nah. I love the words. Very..out there.
Gorgeous language usage, and the like.
As hypocritical as it may seem?
Loosen up on the formatting.
Sprinkle it in, don't douse the pretty piece.
It'd help.
4/9/2007 c1 steev
This reads like a parody of self-absorbed, bad poetry-which means this is equally as terrible as the rest, but more campy. The oh-so unique (that is, not) & pointless masturbatory formatting merely serves to enhance the triteness of the cliches.
This reads like a parody of self-absorbed, bad poetry-which means this is equally as terrible as the rest, but more campy. The oh-so unique (that is, not) & pointless masturbatory formatting merely serves to enhance the triteness of the cliches.
11/8/2006 c1 243ShadowFane
Dang. This was more anger than angst, but it was good none the less. I liked the unique style. :)
SF
243ShadowFaneDang. This was more anger than angst, but it was good none the less. I liked the unique style. :)
SF
10/23/2006 c1 8Written
does the formatting add to the poem? I don't really know what it's supposed to mean. Like, I'm not being snide or sarcastic, I'm asking honestly, did you randomly decide where to use bold or where to use italics? or was the formatting planned?
I honestly just want to know, because sometimes I see poems with every other word made to stand out and it doesnt mean anything to me, but other times it's used sparsely and it makes me feel something. So just wondering your take on it.
A pretty good poem?
8Writtendoes the formatting add to the poem? I don't really know what it's supposed to mean. Like, I'm not being snide or sarcastic, I'm asking honestly, did you randomly decide where to use bold or where to use italics? or was the formatting planned?
I honestly just want to know, because sometimes I see poems with every other word made to stand out and it doesnt mean anything to me, but other times it's used sparsely and it makes me feel something. So just wondering your take on it.
A pretty good poem?
10/17/2006 c1 132OneLastEndeavor
Complete satire, isn't it?
Interesting. :D
And very hard on the eyes.
132OneLastEndeavorComplete satire, isn't it?
Interesting. :D
And very hard on the eyes.
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
I love how you did the kind of art with your poem. It's so cool; I do it too at times, and I think it's so cool. Nice poem, very.. umm.. angsty... (sory, I know that's not a word :P)
41sarah1491I love how you did the kind of art with your poem. It's so cool; I do it too at times, and I think it's so cool. Nice poem, very.. umm.. angsty... (sory, I know that's not a word :P)
6/18/2006 c1 54kaylajac
I have no idea whether you meant this to be sarcasm/satire or you mean it in all honesty.
If you're joking, good job.
If you're not, ease up on the formatting and try to make things a little less straightforward.
54kaylajacI have no idea whether you meant this to be sarcasm/satire or you mean it in all honesty.
If you're joking, good job.
If you're not, ease up on the formatting and try to make things a little less straightforward.
6/9/2006 c1 ode to a firefly
I read a review you left on someone else's poem, and in that review you mocked their use of formatting. So I decided to come see what your writing looks like...and it looks just like the writing of the person you were criticizing. I'm sensing a bit ofh y o c r i s y here. And there is way too much formatting in this poem. It hurts my head.
♫ Christine ♫
I read a review you left on someone else's poem, and in that review you mocked their use of formatting. So I decided to come see what your writing looks like...and it looks just like the writing of the person you were criticizing. I'm sensing a bit ofh y o c r i s y here. And there is way too much formatting in this poem. It hurts my head.
♫ Christine ♫
6/9/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
It's...interesting...
I'm not exactly sure that you're used to the whole 'formatting' thing..you seemed to have a few probs and you hesitated a few times... You also misused a few simple () things that made this look a bit ametuer(of course, "I" can't spell, lol) but you also used a few weird kinda "I'm a poser" things, like s u p e r s p a c e d o u t w o r d s.
W/e, it was a good try.
87Chaos AppleIt's...interesting...
I'm not exactly sure that you're used to the whole 'formatting' thing..you seemed to have a few probs and you hesitated a few times... You also misused a few simple () things that made this look a bit ametuer(of course, "I" can't spell, lol) but you also used a few weird kinda "I'm a poser" things, like s u p e r s p a c e d o u t w o r d s.
W/e, it was a good try.
6/8/2006 c1 18theatrical rhapsodies
I really injoyed this. It is one of the best angst poems I have read in a wile. I really liked the third stanza, Very well written.
(this is going on my fav. list :)
18theatrical rhapsodiesI really injoyed this. It is one of the best angst poems I have read in a wile. I really liked the third stanza, Very well written.
(this is going on my fav. list :)
4/29/2006 c1 77by His blood
hehe. i can't believe i didn't review this yet. thank you for your reviews, i actually do take your comments and suggestions into consideration. this really was quite funny. i am so glad that i don't write like this anymore. the best parts were the second, third and fifth stanzas, they really made me laugh. although, there are people out there who write like this and really do feel it, maybe who aren't the most talented of writers. still, this got your point across very nicely, and it actually made me laugh, which doesn't happen often in parody. very nice job.
77by His bloodhehe. i can't believe i didn't review this yet. thank you for your reviews, i actually do take your comments and suggestions into consideration. this really was quite funny. i am so glad that i don't write like this anymore. the best parts were the second, third and fifth stanzas, they really made me laugh. although, there are people out there who write like this and really do feel it, maybe who aren't the most talented of writers. still, this got your point across very nicely, and it actually made me laugh, which doesn't happen often in parody. very nice job.
4/24/2006 c1 1Formerly
I do enjoy this. Funny (sad) thing is, it's still better AS AN ANGST POEM than most angst poems out there.
1FormerlyI do enjoy this. Funny (sad) thing is, it's still better AS AN ANGST POEM than most angst poems out there.
3/31/2006 c1 23La Gitane
lol. These reviews were more damn entertaining than the poem.
Enjoyable sarcasm - good god you're gonna come to me now and declare that these were your upfront feelings in a moment of catharsis - but I think something a little more succint would have got your point across just as effectively. Padodies have to be sharp.
However, 'flushed it down the toilet' was amusing. And you missed out the random bolding of letters in words, but I suppose there's a limit to how much a person can make themselves write! :)
23La Gitanelol. These reviews were more damn entertaining than the poem.
Enjoyable sarcasm - good god you're gonna come to me now and declare that these were your upfront feelings in a moment of catharsis - but I think something a little more succint would have got your point across just as effectively. Padodies have to be sharp.
However, 'flushed it down the toilet' was amusing. And you missed out the random bolding of letters in words, but I suppose there's a limit to how much a person can make themselves write! :)