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3/7/2006 c1 73Shadow Wisher
What do i think? i think i can relate to this very, very well, haha. this is very good, keep up the good work.SHadow Wisher
3/7/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Commas are alright, though overusing it may be a problem, but don't worry, the commas surprisingly seemed to flow in this one. I liked your rhymes a lot, though one or two seemed a little forced. It's a light-hearted poem, endearing indeed. Good work. :)
3/6/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Good work. It's well done! Write on!

~Anna~

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