for roadside11/17/2008 c1 
16MadamWriterGal
I really like the way that this is written; it has so much energy! I especially like the ending line. Very well done.
16MadamWriterGalI really like the way that this is written; it has so much energy! I especially like the ending line. Very well done.
4/4/2006 c1 3hollyg20
I'm really glad you reviewed my work so I had the chance to look at yours! I really love this piece...I think we've all been in a situation like this before. I love the imagery and the ending...it makes this work. Thanks for posting :)
3hollyg20I'm really glad you reviewed my work so I had the chance to look at yours! I really love this piece...I think we've all been in a situation like this before. I love the imagery and the ending...it makes this work. Thanks for posting :)
3/2/2006 c1 93Venustas iaceo
There's this air of desperation with the last line that I just love. Honest to goodness, love.
93Venustas iaceoThere's this air of desperation with the last line that I just love. Honest to goodness, love.
2/17/2006 c1 83White is a Sin
sweet very good i like it
oh and thanks for the review! ^_^
love ya lots regan
83White is a Sinsweet very good i like it
oh and thanks for the review! ^_^
love ya lots regan
2/16/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
some very vivid imagery~ i like the to~i like the tona and mood you've set up~ good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorosome very vivid imagery~ i like the to~i like the tona and mood you've set up~ good work
keep writing!
2/15/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Very good repetition of stanzas. The feeling comes across well, as the situation is developed so well. Excellent work.
879Moondog DozierVery good repetition of stanzas. The feeling comes across well, as the situation is developed so well. Excellent work.
2/15/2006 c1 237classic violet
Oh so elegant.
"and the road shimmers like still water / The radio fades in between the white noise / and a dusty song from our parents youth / For some reason I want to cry"
I especially loved that part. Fantastic job!
237classic violetOh so elegant.
"and the road shimmers like still water / The radio fades in between the white noise / and a dusty song from our parents youth / For some reason I want to cry"
I especially loved that part. Fantastic job!
2/15/2006 c1 24The FiboNACHI Sequence
that's increadibly sad... i like the way you have used imagry and metaphors...
24The FiboNACHI Sequencethat's increadibly sad... i like the way you have used imagry and metaphors...