for Of a Father and a Son5/8/2006 c1 
14gillian-raine
Wow, evil father much?
hehehe
keep it up... it is interesting... you could expound on it... i deas never die really just evolve... :D
good work
14gillian-raineWow, evil father much?
hehehe
keep it up... it is interesting... you could expound on it... i deas never die really just evolve... :D
good work
3/12/2006 c1 2Nicolas Forndrale
Oh, this is utterly strikingly intense, Dre'!
How come I never came acorss this one?
The sharpness of the flow of the story is incredibly astounding.
Keep on with Sorduel! I'm eyeing on it. :)
- Nicolas
2Nicolas ForndraleOh, this is utterly strikingly intense, Dre'!
How come I never came acorss this one?
The sharpness of the flow of the story is incredibly astounding.
Keep on with Sorduel! I'm eyeing on it. :)
- Nicolas
2/26/2006 c1 85Embellished Heart
Hm, this was rather interesting. I liked it. Very unusual but I would be interested in seeing more chapters on it. It could turn out to be a really good story.~DanaPS Thanks for ur comment about my honesty, i like to think i can share my experiences with ppl, and be appreciated for it-Keep up the good work
85Embellished HeartHm, this was rather interesting. I liked it. Very unusual but I would be interested in seeing more chapters on it. It could turn out to be a really good story.~DanaPS Thanks for ur comment about my honesty, i like to think i can share my experiences with ppl, and be appreciated for it-Keep up the good work
2/15/2006 c1 8Fyodor Van Doren
Low standard. What were you trying to write here? A short script? It makes no sense. And don't start with the 'oh, you just don't understand' crap. I know a lot about writing. This could be good, if you converted it to a short story, and described things more. It could be good stuff, but you need direction.
8Fyodor Van DorenLow standard. What were you trying to write here? A short script? It makes no sense. And don't start with the 'oh, you just don't understand' crap. I know a lot about writing. This could be good, if you converted it to a short story, and described things more. It could be good stuff, but you need direction.