for Paper Hearts2/16/2006 c1 
136Elliptical Shapes
At least your starbucks is cheap in America.
You really captured your own depression well here, good stuff.
Alan.
136Elliptical ShapesAt least your starbucks is cheap in America.
You really captured your own depression well here, good stuff.
Alan.
2/16/2006 c1 2Counter Spiral
I would say this is nice, but it isn't, really. Not that it isn't a good piece of work, in fact I like it very much. It's just not typical nice Valentine's Day. It's quite good, very metaphoric, and a unique form of poetry. A worthwhile effort, congrats.
2Counter SpiralI would say this is nice, but it isn't, really. Not that it isn't a good piece of work, in fact I like it very much. It's just not typical nice Valentine's Day. It's quite good, very metaphoric, and a unique form of poetry. A worthwhile effort, congrats.