for Silent Stars Fly Above7/15/2007 c1 Markus Ripley
While reading this, I also thought of a little girl who's father left the family. Both work pretty well. Great writing style, and good flow, I really liked it.
ripley
While reading this, I also thought of a little girl who's father left the family. Both work pretty well. Great writing style, and good flow, I really liked it.
ripley
4/16/2006 c1 angelicdust
aww.gee... uve got a gr8 flow.. but it as rather sad again... yeah more sad.. than romance.. u got it rite... u must b really hating this guy for doin this to u.. i do! :(... awesum wrk ,nevertheless..temme wat hapnd later on..did u guys patch up ?
aww.gee... uve got a gr8 flow.. but it as rather sad again... yeah more sad.. than romance.. u got it rite... u must b really hating this guy for doin this to u.. i do! :(... awesum wrk ,nevertheless..temme wat hapnd later on..did u guys patch up ?
4/1/2006 c1 
8Riouichi Nagashiri
Hey EvangalineGoth, it's Rio again. I like this one. It captures the pain and anger that one experiences when their heart gets broken. It's beautiful. The girl seems rather delicate and fragile at this point. Beautiful.
~Rio
8Riouichi NagashiriHey EvangalineGoth, it's Rio again. I like this one. It captures the pain and anger that one experiences when their heart gets broken. It's beautiful. The girl seems rather delicate and fragile at this point. Beautiful.
~Rio
3/14/2006 c1 84DemonicDestiny
That's so sweet. It took me awhile to get w/ the program at the end, but that's b/c of my stupidity. Keep writing!
84DemonicDestinyThat's so sweet. It took me awhile to get w/ the program at the end, but that's b/c of my stupidity. Keep writing!