for on repeat1/16/2012 c1 
1surelynot
Very poignant piece - so simply put, which makes it all the more sad in its subtlety. Good work.
1surelynotVery poignant piece - so simply put, which makes it all the more sad in its subtlety. Good work.
4/14/2006 c1 21Insane-Rassbery
Very cool. I love the feeling it leaves behind. I like: "beautiful on repeat" and " I could have done that". I want to let the words wrap around me and keep me warm forever.
-Insane Rassbery
21Insane-RassberyVery cool. I love the feeling it leaves behind. I like: "beautiful on repeat" and " I could have done that". I want to let the words wrap around me and keep me warm forever.
-Insane Rassbery
4/11/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
like the rhyming and the lingo, and very good rhythm, but I don't quite get what it is talking about.
64Arwen Starfirelike the rhyming and the lingo, and very good rhythm, but I don't quite get what it is talking about.
4/8/2006 c1 hey maria
Funny, in a sad way.
...I just imagined what it would be like to listen to that one line, 'you're beautiful' over and over and over and over. Oh God.
Funny, in a sad way.
...I just imagined what it would be like to listen to that one line, 'you're beautiful' over and over and over and over. Oh God.
2/25/2006 c1 3this young lady
wow.for a haiku this is totally amazing...I'm actually really jealous of it! it really touches your heart at the end.*adds to faves*
3this young ladywow.for a haiku this is totally amazing...I'm actually really jealous of it! it really touches your heart at the end.*adds to faves*
2/18/2006 c1 24frayedlifeforce
hehe, nice work, i liked this a lot. you did this well especially in the haiku style. keep it up.
24frayedlifeforcehehe, nice work, i liked this a lot. you did this well especially in the haiku style. keep it up.