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11/14/2006 c1 1FoxStorm
Short, but to the point. A very find job.
7/5/2006 c1 36trash can art
Aiy... :KO:

S'all there is to say, I suppose.
7/2/2006 c1 58Marionette Dancer
truly amazing, id tell u what my fave parts were if u wanted to hear it...you do? ok, it would be the first three lines n then the last 1...awesome...

n i read ur profile, points for the marionette! lol, thnx for the comment it rocked like breakin ben, n i love em too!

marionette/lexa
6/27/2006 c1 16unwilling outcast
Thank you so much for your review! It is the best once i have got! i've been reading some of your stuff, i think its really good! keep working at it beaceuse your writing truely is a pleasure to read. Good job! :)

Danielle
6/2/2006 c1 14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
this is really good. it's deep, and there's so much emotion in so few words. awesome job!

by the way... chicken tenders.
5/24/2006 c1 3gummibared
Whoa! Awesomeness. Yeah this is short - yet so great. xD
5/17/2006 c1 twoofspades
hmm, good poem, use of questions and truth/philosophical thinking is good.
5/14/2006 c1 love-is-hate
this is really nice! it's all cool and clever! lol
5/4/2006 c1 1Forgotten Shadow
Chicken Tenders
5/2/2006 c1 99castelgard
this is awesome!.. good job.. kinda short but still it presents the point quite clear.. although it leaves a hanging question, it still works well with the poem!
4/28/2006 c1 93EvT
Very well phrased, I must say. =D And gee, even though it isn't supposed to rhyme, it strangely does in my head. I wonder why. xP Brilliant!

And thanks for the lovely comment! -hugs-
4/1/2006 c1 18The Ghost Drowned
Ooh lovely! It was sweet, short, and written well enough to fit a lot into four lines.

Chicken tenders by the way, your profile rocks.
3/27/2006 c1 2Syfy
Loved it. Short, but to the point.
3/22/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Deep! It's an excellent piece! It's flows perfectly off the tongue! Keep at it!

~Anna~ ^_^
3/20/2006 c1 82Isabella22
I like this one too.

~Betsy
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