
3/8/2006 c1
48BrokenRelic
Wow. That's really good. Very well written, flows very well, very creative. Very nice poem. I especially like the last two lines, "my life or death, to my dismay never mattered until too late." Good stuff.

Wow. That's really good. Very well written, flows very well, very creative. Very nice poem. I especially like the last two lines, "my life or death, to my dismay never mattered until too late." Good stuff.