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8/4/2006 c1 7Fresh C
It's sad how these situations occur. The frustration alone can seem unbearable. But I think you captured the feel of it nicely.
5/2/2006 c1 11DreamWriterZ09
I love this. Seriously. Why are you so good? Write on.
4/26/2006 c1 593Morwain
interesting i like this its good
4/22/2006 c1 20XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs
Hello! Thanks for your review. ^_^ Anyway, I quite like this. It made me connect with a few things...anyway, good job.


(Btw, you might want to begin accepting anonymous reviews. You'd get a lot more that way!)
4/20/2006 c1 pure grace
I especially love the line "pulled me to where I needed to be". Don't ask me why, I just do. Maybe it's 'cause... oh, I really don't know. This is another example of an excellent poem, though. Your feeling really comes out in it.
4/1/2006 c1 8Riouichi Nagashiri
I've been in that position before. The love and fear are evident. Less evident is the slightest bit of longing. Like you want to be with this person, but you know you can't. I'm in that position right now. It hurts. It's a wonderful poem.

3/11/2006 c1 15liquid-dreams-139
aw cute!... i pity the guy tho... lol
3/9/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
gr... i hate it when love and friendship get mixed together... u never really know what hes gonna act like, friend or more? i had and still have a friend like that. only i have a boyfriend and i geuss im kinda cheating on him too... sh! dont tell any1 i said that! well, nice job expressing urself! good job! choa! love, Caitlin
2/23/2006 c1 23Saint Anus
I had a situation relevent to this...dunno why I didnt see it...it was only rather obvious..the sad part...I had a boyfriend at the time so its not like I couldve done anything anyway...*snaps out of it* Right well really nice writing, keep it up!And thx for the review! Ta-ta!
2/20/2006 c1 140happypills03
ive had this happen before.. its awful isnt it
2/18/2006 c1 43je suis une pomme du terre
wow. i have a guy friend that treats me like that. i hate it when it turns out he really likes you, but you only find out when its too late.
2/18/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
*cries* this is so emotional. I quite like it. What can I say? It looks good to me. lol. Keep writing!


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