for Wrong for Falling5/13/2006 c1 
10Nova-Janna
I try to reciprocate reviews as well. I like this poem, despite feeling that it lacks rhythm at times, because I can totally relate to it. Nice job capturing a common feeling in so few words.
10Nova-JannaI try to reciprocate reviews as well. I like this poem, despite feeling that it lacks rhythm at times, because I can totally relate to it. Nice job capturing a common feeling in so few words.
4/21/2006 c1 129checkerboxed
Oh, man. You have completely captured (in many less words) exactly what i've tried to convey. Lovely job, and here's another thing we've kinda got in common... writing along the same lines. Awesome! ...this is a ridiculous review, but i'm not feeling very articulate. Thanks for the review, and keep writing! -O.Rhia
129checkerboxedOh, man. You have completely captured (in many less words) exactly what i've tried to convey. Lovely job, and here's another thing we've kinda got in common... writing along the same lines. Awesome! ...this is a ridiculous review, but i'm not feeling very articulate. Thanks for the review, and keep writing! -O.Rhia
3/14/2006 c1 43je suis une pomme du terre
I can't believe that on some of your poems there's only six or seven reviews. Seems to me there should be more! Keep writing.
43je suis une pomme du terreI can't believe that on some of your poems there's only six or seven reviews. Seems to me there should be more! Keep writing.
3/11/2006 c1 15liquid-dreams-139
i can so relate! i love it! 'im so wrong fo falling for you" shit i love that line! i can so relate!
15liquid-dreams-139i can so relate! i love it! 'im so wrong fo falling for you" shit i love that line! i can so relate!
3/9/2006 c1 9ScentedCigarettes
Lol, thanks for the review. Yeah, my name is Blake (female) and it's a true story that I wrote off of what happened to me.I was going to change the name to a female's name because I knew people would get confused.. but then it wouldn't be the same.. I dont know. LolBtw, I really liked this poem, Im going to read the rest of your stuff. I like it.
9ScentedCigarettesLol, thanks for the review. Yeah, my name is Blake (female) and it's a true story that I wrote off of what happened to me.I was going to change the name to a female's name because I knew people would get confused.. but then it wouldn't be the same.. I dont know. LolBtw, I really liked this poem, Im going to read the rest of your stuff. I like it.
3/9/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
good job but personally, not as I'll Never Be Yours. dont get me wrong i do like it... just not perfect lol! keep writing! Choa! Love, Caitlin
123Black and White Dreamsgood job but personally, not as I'll Never Be Yours. dont get me wrong i do like it... just not perfect lol! keep writing! Choa! Love, Caitlin
3/4/2006 c1 Benjamin - To Be Deleted
You are amazing.
I feel so stupid cuz I keep falling for the one girl I can't have no matter what I do for her, or how much it hurts inside everytime I see her.
And you, of course, have captured my feelings perfectly. I don't know anyone that could do it better.
You are amazing.
I feel so stupid cuz I keep falling for the one girl I can't have no matter what I do for her, or how much it hurts inside everytime I see her.
And you, of course, have captured my feelings perfectly. I don't know anyone that could do it better.
2/20/2006 c1 140happypills03
guys suck sometimes.. that they do that.. u just can't trust them or urself sometimes
140happypills03guys suck sometimes.. that they do that.. u just can't trust them or urself sometimes
2/18/2006 c1 17emera-fire22
I really like this because I can relate to it. I've fallin for someone and I was being stupid, yup. So great poem!
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17emera-fire22I really like this because I can relate to it. I've fallin for someone and I was being stupid, yup. So great poem!
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2/18/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
This is simple, yet effective. What can I say? Good work! Keep it up!
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57This is simple, yet effective. What can I say? Good work! Keep it up!
~Anna~