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5/9/2006 c1 37Ed the Roach
wow, I really love this piece. This is how I feel most of the time, but not to the same extreme. Thank you for reviewing my poem - I just went through a break-up kinda thing so that's why I was stereotyping guys and girls. I was just angry. But I know not all girls are like that or all guys. It was really just about the kind of girl I am and the kind of guys I've dealt with so often.
4/26/2006 c1 593Morwain
wow sadly i've felt this way before good poem though
4/19/2006 c1 13Mortifer Amor Phasmus
Once again amazing. And I know what it's like to pretend like everything is okay even when it isn't. It's a part of being human.
4/3/2006 c1 32Veronika
Snagged a heartstring or two there, I know how it feels to hide from everyone else. Touching, and easy to relate to. Especially got attached to the lines, "This is me pretendingI'm more than I amand nothing is important to me". Nicely done, keep up the good work!

3/4/2006 c1 Benjamin - To Be Deleted
Jeez... as I read your poetry, it always is a problem I'm going through, or one I've been through. I do believe you one of the best poes I have read in a long, long time. It's kinda scary just how much I can rather painfully relate to everything you write...
2/28/2006 c1 23Terrafauna
Nice description of how you feel. It's really easy to relate to. Great job!
2/26/2006 c1 41But I Die Without You
This applies to me so much it's scary... love it. A lot.
2/24/2006 c1 17wolfiel
Pretending. It reminded me a lot of myself, actually. I think about this all the time, so it's very nice to finally hear someone who shares the same feelings, whether or not you're really pretending or just writing about it. This simultaneous feeling of panic and total self-control was very surreal and yet realistic at the same time. It's something I've often felt and then wondered if I really did. (I'm pretty sure I did xP)
2/20/2006 c1 24FarseerFool
And yet is it possible to not pretend? Sometimes I wonder. But as for the poem very good usually I don't like repetition but I think it was used well here. Keep writing!
2/19/2006 c1 37Miss Anonymous hp
Wow! Powerful poem. Unlike what you said on my poem (thanks so much for the review, by the way), I am the complete opposite. I cannot get a rhythm to work right unless I use rhymes. So, for you to create this masterpiece with a single rhyme is just... wow. I'm impressed. Great job!
2/18/2006 c1 43je suis une pomme du terre
I pretend like that too. It's kind of like that poem i wrote called masks- always making people see who they expect to see instead of who you are, and when you're who you are you've been pretending for so long that you can't even stand to be yourself. I love the way I can totally relate to your stuff. Keep writing. You're one of my favorite authors on this site.
2/17/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
*applaudes* this is really, really good! I like it lots. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

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