
3/7/2006 c1
20Once in a blue moon
I really like the simplicity of this, and the half rhyme. It conveys the message very well.

I really like the simplicity of this, and the half rhyme. It conveys the message very well.
3/3/2006 c1
241Werewolf Nighteyes
How true. Simple and gets the point across. Not much I can comment on.

How true. Simple and gets the point across. Not much I can comment on.
2/17/2006 c1 Autumnymph
Ah, now this I understand.
How true. Congratulations for pointing out something that's there, but not noticeable. That's what poets do =)
Ah, now this I understand.
How true. Congratulations for pointing out something that's there, but not noticeable. That's what poets do =)
2/17/2006 c1
69TawnyBEEFman000000000000Gassss
I have a simple gesture. It's a sign of affection and respect at our school. It's the middle finger.
Good work.
Yours Cromulentfully,
MOI

I have a simple gesture. It's a sign of affection and respect at our school. It's the middle finger.
Good work.
Yours Cromulentfully,
MOI