
5/9/2008 c2 hana
I love the story you have written, and it's killing me wondering why the boss wants her alive. Does he love her? lol that would be the ost drama ever to be in love with a mafia leader. Anyways please update I am dying to know about jitsuko!
I love the story you have written, and it's killing me wondering why the boss wants her alive. Does he love her? lol that would be the ost drama ever to be in love with a mafia leader. Anyways please update I am dying to know about jitsuko!
1/10/2008 c2 kiki
please! please! update!
please! please! update!
9/1/2007 c1 Twilight Starr
Lovely beginning.
I like it.
It definitely has potential although I don't get "Jko Eat World", the title.
Good luck with writing and this story.
~Twilight Starr~
Lovely beginning.
I like it.
It definitely has potential although I don't get "Jko Eat World", the title.
Good luck with writing and this story.
~Twilight Starr~
4/21/2007 c2 Rikayla
Oh. This is interesting. I thought it would start off more with the Kane and the girl getting together, but I'm glad it didn't. :) I have a feeling Kane is going to pop up again, right?
And oh, what do you mean "if my parents had survived the flight"? Is she adopted or...? Anyhow, it's a good story. It's a nice twist, that's for sure. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of it. :)
Oh. This is interesting. I thought it would start off more with the Kane and the girl getting together, but I'm glad it didn't. :) I have a feeling Kane is going to pop up again, right?
And oh, what do you mean "if my parents had survived the flight"? Is she adopted or...? Anyhow, it's a good story. It's a nice twist, that's for sure. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of it. :)
4/9/2006 c2
3gisellekeiko
Mhmm interesting. I hope you update this soon. I hate it when well-written stories with original plots like yours don't get reviews, as opposed to overdone, punk loves chick, teen angst!, high school romance ones do.

Mhmm interesting. I hope you update this soon. I hate it when well-written stories with original plots like yours don't get reviews, as opposed to overdone, punk loves chick, teen angst!, high school romance ones do.
2/28/2006 c1 Lets Play Russian Roulette
o_O you changed the title? lol.oh yeah..and i need to ask you something about that cellphone ringtone of hers... haha.
o_O you changed the title? lol.oh yeah..and i need to ask you something about that cellphone ringtone of hers... haha.