for Apologies & Dead Autumn Leaves5/13/2006 c1 
24Lunatics Words
really deep, reminds of earth allot, very descriptive, good job, really enjoyed reading this
24Lunatics Wordsreally deep, reminds of earth allot, very descriptive, good job, really enjoyed reading this
3/19/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
This is deep, moving, and unbelievably beautiful.
I was shocked by the depth of this poem and by how it's so intricate in its reading.
I love your work. Faves for sure.
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
87Chaos AppleThis is deep, moving, and unbelievably beautiful.
I was shocked by the depth of this poem and by how it's so intricate in its reading.
I love your work. Faves for sure.
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
3/4/2006 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
Earthy...deep...and so far removed from it, like the speaker is seeing it happen on a flickering black n white screen...just amazing.`~bella~`
134emeraude-irlandaisEarthy...deep...and so far removed from it, like the speaker is seeing it happen on a flickering black n white screen...just amazing.`~bella~`
2/20/2006 c1 Quaviver
I'll have to apologize at the outset, because I don't have much experience with poetry-I'm a prosy person really. But you reviewed my work (thanks!) so here I am.
I find this poem lucid and vicious; earthydark but dreamily metaphysical at the same time. Something like actual experience condensed and purified until all that's left is thick, strong, concentrated emotion/lessness. It's gorgeously bone-shivering.
I like the little italicized poem-in-a-poem too. It resembles an epitaph... Very appropriate.
I'll have to apologize at the outset, because I don't have much experience with poetry-I'm a prosy person really. But you reviewed my work (thanks!) so here I am.
I find this poem lucid and vicious; earthydark but dreamily metaphysical at the same time. Something like actual experience condensed and purified until all that's left is thick, strong, concentrated emotion/lessness. It's gorgeously bone-shivering.
I like the little italicized poem-in-a-poem too. It resembles an epitaph... Very appropriate.
2/18/2006 c1 32Walk like a Ghost
Pretty spooky...in a good way. I honestly can say I love this poem. It's emotional, and yet it has a tinge of apathy. Brilliant
32Walk like a GhostPretty spooky...in a good way. I honestly can say I love this poem. It's emotional, and yet it has a tinge of apathy. Brilliant
2/18/2006 c1 24she's not breathing
strong message, strong feeling - beautiful packaging & brilliant realism. i love it. it's gritty & so personal you can feel the words shudder as they hiss inside you. "Hope left me sitting in the gutter" & "winter trees" & the entire first bit about bruises & bones made it so vivid. the italicized stanza - raw, bitter, painful. the ending WAS an ending. love it.
~kait
24she's not breathingstrong message, strong feeling - beautiful packaging & brilliant realism. i love it. it's gritty & so personal you can feel the words shudder as they hiss inside you. "Hope left me sitting in the gutter" & "winter trees" & the entire first bit about bruises & bones made it so vivid. the italicized stanza - raw, bitter, painful. the ending WAS an ending. love it.
~kait
2/18/2006 c1 wolfspawn
Beautiful.
Beautiful.