2/18/2006 c1 141AllyCred
This is beautiful, i love the wording and the imagery is so strong and inviting, you had me in that car, well done!
This is beautiful, i love the wording and the imagery is so strong and inviting, you had me in that car, well done!
2/18/2006 c1 92randompoetry
"what-is & what-might-have-beens that drift upon the air" this really seems nostalgic to me, I can feel it in the way it reads (so easy). Great job.
"what-is & what-might-have-beens that drift upon the air" this really seems nostalgic to me, I can feel it in the way it reads (so easy). Great job.
2/18/2006 c1 54tasted like heartache
that was really pretty, it had a very optimistic undertone to it. at least, i think so.
that was really pretty, it had a very optimistic undertone to it. at least, i think so.