for An Answer?12/16/2007 c1 InvisibleLight
I have to say, I really love the way you describe things. I mean "If I screamed in pain would you run to my side? Skid to a hlt. Turn like a tide" that was really good. One of my favorite parts. Keep writing, you're really great. (:
-GN Perone
I have to say, I really love the way you describe things. I mean "If I screamed in pain would you run to my side? Skid to a hlt. Turn like a tide" that was really good. One of my favorite parts. Keep writing, you're really great. (:
-GN Perone
2/18/2006 c1 
81Princess-anna57
I heart this! It's really, really good! *applaudes* excellent!
I really like your penname by the way! ^_^ Good stuff!
Keep writing! ^_^
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57I heart this! It's really, really good! *applaudes* excellent!
I really like your penname by the way! ^_^ Good stuff!
Keep writing! ^_^
~Anna~
2/18/2006 c1 15Lauren Wolfe
I was surprised by the sudden shift of the meaning of the word "you" in this poem...though good presentation of the "main question"...keep it up! ^^
15Lauren WolfeI was surprised by the sudden shift of the meaning of the word "you" in this poem...though good presentation of the "main question"...keep it up! ^^
2/18/2006 c1 12eighteen hundred
This is alright. I think the rhyming takes away from the piece, restricts it too much; "we" bolded looks awkward; diction could be a bit more entertaining. But not a bad piece at all.
12eighteen hundredThis is alright. I think the rhyming takes away from the piece, restricts it too much; "we" bolded looks awkward; diction could be a bit more entertaining. But not a bad piece at all.