for Barney, Barney, what have you done to me?5/31/2007 c1 
32In State of Agony
m diferent...lol...
keep it writing
this world is ((In State Of Agony))
32In State of Agonym diferent...lol...
keep it writing
this world is ((In State Of Agony))
4/26/2007 c1 78WinterDeity
you know what's even scarier than barney...boobas...big hairy balls with tiny little heads...that sing and dance and invade little children's bedrooms disguised as a marketing ploy for the creators to make money. no no no, what's even scarier than -that- is that parents actually let their children watch and buy such things... *shivers* FUN FACT: it's not cold in here.
~Winter~
78WinterDeityyou know what's even scarier than barney...boobas...big hairy balls with tiny little heads...that sing and dance and invade little children's bedrooms disguised as a marketing ploy for the creators to make money. no no no, what's even scarier than -that- is that parents actually let their children watch and buy such things... *shivers* FUN FACT: it's not cold in here.
~Winter~
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
HAHA! I love it! You had a spelling mistake (used slang: "lil") but other than that, the poem was hilarious, very truthful, and very entertaining.
41sarah1491HAHA! I love it! You had a spelling mistake (used slang: "lil") but other than that, the poem was hilarious, very truthful, and very entertaining.
8/28/2006 c1 1yuaypsaieunxpiasu
Ok. Certainly not great, a couple of lines just didn't scan, but as you don't know a thing about poetry, I can say it was alright, and the last line made me grin.Well done. (although you are a hypocrit)
1yuaypsaieunxpiasuOk. Certainly not great, a couple of lines just didn't scan, but as you don't know a thing about poetry, I can say it was alright, and the last line made me grin.Well done. (although you are a hypocrit)
8/19/2006 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
I guess "wacky" doesn't really rhyme with "teletubby." But there you go. Good beat to this piece. It's very appealing to read, because it flows so well.
I've noticed that there's a particular person, claiming to be an English major, leaving rather mean reviews for your poetry. Let's just step back for a moment and ask ourselves how an English major wouldn't know the different between "your" and "you're"? Ah, bask in the question with me.
Interesting poem, this one. Not REALLY my cup of tea, but we've all got our preferences. But yeah, Barney is a freak.
J
I guess "wacky" doesn't really rhyme with "teletubby." But there you go. Good beat to this piece. It's very appealing to read, because it flows so well.
I've noticed that there's a particular person, claiming to be an English major, leaving rather mean reviews for your poetry. Let's just step back for a moment and ask ourselves how an English major wouldn't know the different between "your" and "you're"? Ah, bask in the question with me.
Interesting poem, this one. Not REALLY my cup of tea, but we've all got our preferences. But yeah, Barney is a freak.
J
6/20/2006 c1 lalaLAMA
TRUST ME, im plenty good at stuff, including knowing you suck at writing, knowing your a bitch, AND knowing that your a low life loser who needs to get a hobby...and by a hobby, i mean something your actually good at.
TRUST ME, im plenty good at stuff, including knowing you suck at writing, knowing your a bitch, AND knowing that your a low life loser who needs to get a hobby...and by a hobby, i mean something your actually good at.
5/12/2006 c1 6anigurl28
i find this poem both amusing and sad. amusing because what you say is true. sad because that 'purple teletubby' was once a favorite character most little kids.
6anigurl28i find this poem both amusing and sad. amusing because what you say is true. sad because that 'purple teletubby' was once a favorite character most little kids.
4/7/2006 c1 124in theory
Haha the strangest thing I've read today. Bizarrely addictive though. Great work, it was a fun read!
124in theoryHaha the strangest thing I've read today. Bizarrely addictive though. Great work, it was a fun read!
3/31/2006 c1 23La Gitane
He. The subject matter made me smile - although Barney was never too big here and I loathed him with every fibre of my being... I was quite fond of the purple tellytubby though. He was kinda cute with his handbag and all. :)
There are a couple of imperfections in your rhythms, but nothing overly jarring.
Seriously. Barney. *shudders*
23La GitaneHe. The subject matter made me smile - although Barney was never too big here and I loathed him with every fibre of my being... I was quite fond of the purple tellytubby though. He was kinda cute with his handbag and all. :)
There are a couple of imperfections in your rhythms, but nothing overly jarring.
Seriously. Barney. *shudders*
3/31/2006 c1 Cedric Quilfeather
Lol. Uh, I don't know what to say.
Be proud; not many can render Cedric speechless, lol.
Lol. Uh, I don't know what to say.
Be proud; not many can render Cedric speechless, lol.