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7/20/2006 c1 11three pipes
It was really good. I hate unnecessary words, and yours had a perfect amount.

I do agree with Nightmare about the last line, but if you like it, then by all means keep it.
6/24/2006 c1 Anime Freakizoid
i guess i miss this one, i apologize! *sweatdrop* nothing short of genius from an author I love to read from! also, i put up a new chapter of dark blind ice, but you might review it anonymous or with the profile because i deleted the main character profile in the beginning. *takes deep breath* just wanted to let you know, and lament of darkness is updated too in case you were waiting for that. but don't stop writing, i jump up and down every time i read something from you! have a good weekend! ^_^-anime freakizoid X^_^X
4/28/2006 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Hey, great poem! However... I think you should change the last line... it kind of broke the flow of the poetry a bit... but it's your poem... haha... no mistakes I can find here... keep it up!
2/23/2006 c1 13Shadowhound
it's sad really, we only know it is painless because no one screams when they sleep. interesting poem.

2/20/2006 c1 6ixi
Simple and effective, the poem shows the bleak horizons of endless pain...it's very saddening :(

Awesome job, I love this poem :)
2/19/2006 c1 5pencilchewer
Very nice.. good job
2/19/2006 c1 59S0ulSearching
*cheers* I like this-its simple, but it says a lot. I relate ^_^ It's awsome, keep it up. And I have to say- I love your username ^_^ Just had to throw that in.-pammy-
2/19/2006 c1 44DarkPrue
I really liked this. Simple yet very effective. Keep up the good work.

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