for Overdose7/20/2006 c1 
11three pipes
It was really good. I hate unnecessary words, and yours had a perfect amount.
I do agree with Nightmare about the last line, but if you like it, then by all means keep it.
11three pipesIt was really good. I hate unnecessary words, and yours had a perfect amount.
I do agree with Nightmare about the last line, but if you like it, then by all means keep it.
6/24/2006 c1 Anime Freakizoid
i guess i miss this one, i apologize! *sweatdrop* nothing short of genius from an author I love to read from! also, i put up a new chapter of dark blind ice, but you might review it anonymous or with the profile because i deleted the main character profile in the beginning. *takes deep breath* just wanted to let you know, and lament of darkness is updated too in case you were waiting for that. but don't stop writing, i jump up and down every time i read something from you! have a good weekend! ^_^-anime freakizoid X^_^X
i guess i miss this one, i apologize! *sweatdrop* nothing short of genius from an author I love to read from! also, i put up a new chapter of dark blind ice, but you might review it anonymous or with the profile because i deleted the main character profile in the beginning. *takes deep breath* just wanted to let you know, and lament of darkness is updated too in case you were waiting for that. but don't stop writing, i jump up and down every time i read something from you! have a good weekend! ^_^-anime freakizoid X^_^X
4/28/2006 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Hey, great poem! However... I think you should change the last line... it kind of broke the flow of the poetry a bit... but it's your poem... haha... no mistakes I can find here... keep it up!
Hey, great poem! However... I think you should change the last line... it kind of broke the flow of the poetry a bit... but it's your poem... haha... no mistakes I can find here... keep it up!
2/23/2006 c1 13Shadowhound
it's sad really, we only know it is painless because no one screams when they sleep. interesting poem.
Shadowhound
13Shadowhoundit's sad really, we only know it is painless because no one screams when they sleep. interesting poem.
Shadowhound
2/20/2006 c1 6ixi
Simple and effective, the poem shows the bleak horizons of endless pain...it's very saddening :(
Awesome job, I love this poem :)
6ixiSimple and effective, the poem shows the bleak horizons of endless pain...it's very saddening :(
Awesome job, I love this poem :)
2/19/2006 c1 59S0ulSearching
*cheers* I like this-its simple, but it says a lot. I relate ^_^ It's awsome, keep it up. And I have to say- I love your username ^_^ Just had to throw that in.-pammy-
59S0ulSearching*cheers* I like this-its simple, but it says a lot. I relate ^_^ It's awsome, keep it up. And I have to say- I love your username ^_^ Just had to throw that in.-pammy-