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3/15/2006 c1 48chocohound
Really powerful. The bold and underlined parts really accent stuff...good job!
3/10/2006 c1 44catching-falling-stars
i don't know what you are talking about, i think this is a great poem! you described a break up really well. the last line was super stellar, too!

p.s. i apologize if my reviews are kind of cheesy
2/20/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
I did like this one, even if you don't think its good. I'm not sure if there was intential imagery in here but I def. had sometime of movie for it playing in my head (if that makes any sense lol) wonderful job!
2/19/2006 c1 usuckmytrunk
You're right, cliche, cliche. Advice: this isnt ur talent stick to humping ur mom in bed, emotions? Ah, i hate this fucking piece of shit story...ja...

P.S ew, i be ur ugly
2/19/2006 c1 17Dancing Fairy
I really liked this. Your use of repetition is effective without being exhausted and the language i.e. 'From under tear laden lashes' paints a really clear and poignant picture. Uniquae perspective too! Fab x
2/19/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved how you gave that complete glimpse into this moment; all of the detail and verses evolved into just this one moment that you were describing. I really love the stillness of that, in a poem that was violet with emotion. I'm really impressed, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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