for Brokenly Invisible5/19/2006 c4 
10CaFFy
I like the story... I just notice that you mess up the POV sometimes... unless I've gone insane which is quite possible.
10CaFFyI like the story... I just notice that you mess up the POV sometimes... unless I've gone insane which is quite possible.
3/28/2006 c10 25Esquirella
I think Richard needs to meet with a steamroller head on ... but that's just me.
25EsquirellaI think Richard needs to meet with a steamroller head on ... but that's just me.
3/6/2006 c7 25Esquirella
Wouldn't a social worker, especially in this day and age, take a child's word a bit more seriously? Just an observation.
Anyway, if Sven were moved from again, it might be better for him. His aunt's a real bitch and Richard's an ass.
25EsquirellaWouldn't a social worker, especially in this day and age, take a child's word a bit more seriously? Just an observation.
Anyway, if Sven were moved from again, it might be better for him. His aunt's a real bitch and Richard's an ass.
3/4/2006 c6 3bambi4real
that was an evil cliffie! I think it's either his mother or Miach. My bet is its mommy dearest.
3bambi4realthat was an evil cliffie! I think it's either his mother or Miach. My bet is its mommy dearest.
3/3/2006 c6 25Esquirella
It's Miach, isn't it? And now Sven will be in more trouble. Have I mentioned that I hate Sven's aunt? I do? And Richard is vile. But the story's cool.
25EsquirellaIt's Miach, isn't it? And now Sven will be in more trouble. Have I mentioned that I hate Sven's aunt? I do? And Richard is vile. But the story's cool.
2/27/2006 c5 3bambi4real
i really like this story. you are doing an excellent job. i am intrigued by the mysterious sven.
3bambi4reali really like this story. you are doing an excellent job. i am intrigued by the mysterious sven.
2/27/2006 c5 25Esquirella
It sounds like Sven needs to spend more time with someone other than his aunt and her boyfriend.
25EsquirellaIt sounds like Sven needs to spend more time with someone other than his aunt and her boyfriend.