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6/21/2007 c1 Tytherpol
uh.

yeah.

(i know i read things way wrong because i always always want to make them political) but i like the meaning i got from this. even if it is wrong.

which it's hard to say if there's a right or wrong because if you take all aspects of the words into consideration, and they are actually like justified in your interpretation...

haha whatever.

the only thing i would have done differently is made the last two lines

"All poetry is/Self-gratification"

because i like the meaning of it better.

it helps more logically tie-in with the past-art and expressionism-ish-whatever

and plus that would make "self" be capitalized

and gratification still lowercase but attatched to a capital word (especially self lol).

but uh it's good. i like it.
3/22/2006 c1 173sunshineofyourlife
HAHA! :D

oh my goodness! this totally reminds me of the big thing in like 5th grade: 'one, two, three, four; i declare a thumb war, five, six, seven, eight; i use this hand to masturbate.' oh my goodness i love it!

-sunshine :D
2/25/2006 c1 14kit feral
Hahaha! I love it. :D The idea is fantastic. "Manmade as masturbation" just cracks me up. I'm finding it hard to type I'm laughing so hard! Just... wow. Awesome work. Your mind is strange, but I love it. :P Never stop writing!
2/25/2006 c1 hey maria
Hahahahahaha. + favorites
2/25/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
interesting~ i suppose the ideas could be developed further, still, good work

keep writing!
2/19/2006 c1 6Panda Delilah
ahahahahah if there was a word way to put "i am not breathing because i'm laughing so hard" maybe ianbbilash...

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