3/26/2006 c3 Ariel
Love the story and the plot of the story. Please continue!
Love the story and the plot of the story. Please continue!
3/10/2006 c3 13Rebecca Knight
Lol! I love it... update soon.
And that part at the end where its saying basically.. why do girls get mad at the other woman when its their man doing the wrong thing was plain out funny.. cuz its so true.
Lol! I love it... update soon.
And that part at the end where its saying basically.. why do girls get mad at the other woman when its their man doing the wrong thing was plain out funny.. cuz its so true.
3/2/2006 c3 1innocent lil devil
wow...i like, i like alot lol. seems like you have a really good start an i really want to see what happens next so update soon. hopefully you're gonna have more in about their background and stuff at some point but i guess i'll see when the next chapter comes out.
wow...i like, i like alot lol. seems like you have a really good start an i really want to see what happens next so update soon. hopefully you're gonna have more in about their background and stuff at some point but i guess i'll see when the next chapter comes out.
2/28/2006 c1 3Bravado Pirate
Really good story! It's cute and he sounds hot. Can't wait for your next update.
Really good story! It's cute and he sounds hot. Can't wait for your next update.