for Sentimental Fool Learn to Walk on Coals5/11/2006 c1 AstarteKatz
Oh my... This definitely struck a major chord in me...
Great work. Completely personifies the utter mystery and yet comfort I have with a friend of mine...
Really good job. M'gonna go read more now. ^^
Oh my... This definitely struck a major chord in me...
Great work. Completely personifies the utter mystery and yet comfort I have with a friend of mine...
Really good job. M'gonna go read more now. ^^
3/11/2006 c1 
79vturnip
This poem was a real moment of enjoyment. It was very meaningful. Thank you for your creativity.
79vturnipThis poem was a real moment of enjoyment. It was very meaningful. Thank you for your creativity.
2/20/2006 c1 7Sterces
Ahem... I know what I said before in email, and I know that this is probably NOT a good idea, but I was just curious about something.
Pretending for a moment that we can CARELY REMEMBER EACH OTHER, I would like to say that despite our recent seperation, I will always remember your talent and all of your wonderful poems (including this one). The purpose of this comment is probably a pathetic one, but I figured I would go ahead and swallow my pride and ask something of you that you really don't need to do, nor should you feel obligated to do it.
Pretending for a moment that we are COMPLETE STRANGERS, I would like to ask of you that you read and review my poem "Encounter by Moonlight", only because it is dedicated to you and I truly value your opinion on my works of utter crap.
So, whether this is a good idea or a bad idea, I had to try. I'm not proud of it, but I just wanted to let you know that if you feel like reading any poetry, you should read that poem of mine... ONLY... that poem. You don't need to show any interest in any of the others (and it might be a good idea if you don't), but that one poem... Well, I had started it a long ways back and never posted it. It was for you so... It doesn't have anything really to do with you, but I honestly wrote it with you in mind... All our talk about "scaries" and such... inspired it... so...
I remind you that it is very okay if you don't wish at all to read it. That's just fine. I can't say I have been reading yours, at least not until I actually posted this one. And I most likely will not continue to.
But there is a poem there for you if you do wish to read it, and from "stranger" to "stranger", I would appreciate your thoughts of praise or improvement for it. Heck, you don't even need to comment. I just wanted to let you know that it is there.
Good jobGood day
Sterces
7StercesAhem... I know what I said before in email, and I know that this is probably NOT a good idea, but I was just curious about something.
Pretending for a moment that we can CARELY REMEMBER EACH OTHER, I would like to say that despite our recent seperation, I will always remember your talent and all of your wonderful poems (including this one). The purpose of this comment is probably a pathetic one, but I figured I would go ahead and swallow my pride and ask something of you that you really don't need to do, nor should you feel obligated to do it.
Pretending for a moment that we are COMPLETE STRANGERS, I would like to ask of you that you read and review my poem "Encounter by Moonlight", only because it is dedicated to you and I truly value your opinion on my works of utter crap.
So, whether this is a good idea or a bad idea, I had to try. I'm not proud of it, but I just wanted to let you know that if you feel like reading any poetry, you should read that poem of mine... ONLY... that poem. You don't need to show any interest in any of the others (and it might be a good idea if you don't), but that one poem... Well, I had started it a long ways back and never posted it. It was for you so... It doesn't have anything really to do with you, but I honestly wrote it with you in mind... All our talk about "scaries" and such... inspired it... so...
I remind you that it is very okay if you don't wish at all to read it. That's just fine. I can't say I have been reading yours, at least not until I actually posted this one. And I most likely will not continue to.
But there is a poem there for you if you do wish to read it, and from "stranger" to "stranger", I would appreciate your thoughts of praise or improvement for it. Heck, you don't even need to comment. I just wanted to let you know that it is there.
Good jobGood day
Sterces