
7/29/2016 c6 Guest
Sorry to hear that but the story was very good.
Sorry to hear that but the story was very good.
5/31/2007 c5 black ennui
i like how you cleared up that the boys aren't exactly brainless fools in this chapter. :p
keep updating!
i like how you cleared up that the boys aren't exactly brainless fools in this chapter. :p
keep updating!
5/30/2007 c4
1A. C. Oasis
I love it. Really cool idea, I love how the events in the dreams are exactly the same, and they are told really well. This chapter seems a bit more risque than the others, lol.

I love it. Really cool idea, I love how the events in the dreams are exactly the same, and they are told really well. This chapter seems a bit more risque than the others, lol.
1/15/2007 c5 hellokittygirl
This is fucking amazing. Hm. I think the last chapter was pretty awesome, too. The dreams are fine with me, mostly 'cause I've read things more intense, haha.
Update soon?
-Lqd
This is fucking amazing. Hm. I think the last chapter was pretty awesome, too. The dreams are fine with me, mostly 'cause I've read things more intense, haha.
Update soon?
-Lqd
10/9/2006 c2 amazing
those lyrics area really good. I give you mad props, I could hear them when I was reading it was really good. your band must be good
those lyrics area really good. I give you mad props, I could hear them when I was reading it was really good. your band must be good
8/23/2006 c4
2lifesabeach
Are you still working on this? I hope you update soon. It is a cool idea. I keep thinking they'll each suddenly realize the other one has the same dreams.

Are you still working on this? I hope you update soon. It is a cool idea. I keep thinking they'll each suddenly realize the other one has the same dreams.
3/7/2006 c4 Sara
I love it so far! It's got a plot that's got me hooked and the characters are well developed. The only thing I can say is make the chapters a little longer and maybe more from each view point before switching over to the other person's viewpoint. Update soon!
I love it so far! It's got a plot that's got me hooked and the characters are well developed. The only thing I can say is make the chapters a little longer and maybe more from each view point before switching over to the other person's viewpoint. Update soon!
3/5/2006 c4 Pammy
Pretty good so far, but would be better if you had their point of views in separate chapters rather than have them in the same
Pretty good so far, but would be better if you had their point of views in separate chapters rather than have them in the same
2/25/2006 c3 cloudy127
good story...i think you should just stay with some pov from summer and some from peter
Update Soon!
good story...i think you should just stay with some pov from summer and some from peter
Update Soon!