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2/21/2006 c1 40Moosher
Good poem.. I loved its simplicity mostly.. It reminds me of this old poem i wrote..cause of the format you wrote it in.. this is a lot better. I also like the repetition in the first and last stanzas. Pretty, and sad. Write on!

-Meme
2/21/2006 c1 19Olivine
im guessing you got an A? well i give you an A+ ! and a smiley sticker :) smiley stickers are always nice. lol.

awesome job, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

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