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3/13/2006 c1 Chemistry
Sorry it's been so long. My AIM is really screwed up.I took the time to read all the poems I've been missing and i must say that you've still got it. ;3Miss ya and download w.skype.comIm on there all the time.My screen name is ubercazzThanks!
3/11/2006 c1 Colin
AMAZING. First off, no E's is a spectacular feat in itself. Good job. Your almost-rhymes and imagery is so vivid and intense, it reminds me of greats like Ginsberg. My only critique is that when you write (I read the explanation of the poem) be careful not to be too cryptic. If you hold it way above our heads we (the readers) will get confused. But, keep it up there like a catnip mouse. :) Just let us grasp those images every now and then.Hope this helps.
2/21/2006 c1 Coolies
Oh my.

It's quite lovely.
2/21/2006 c1 31Zakiue
I like it. It's hard to see past the words you chose. Don't get me wrong, great wording, word choice, whatever. But it's still a little busy. But...it works. I like it. Thumbs up!

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