
4/13/2006 c1
20VirgilKane ismyname
This was uhkay. Although it IS quite original, I've gotten tired of the "faking/lying/pretending" theme. Sry if that sounded mean. But, anyjoe, I liked how it resembled a narrative.

This was uhkay. Although it IS quite original, I've gotten tired of the "faking/lying/pretending" theme. Sry if that sounded mean. But, anyjoe, I liked how it resembled a narrative.
3/24/2006 c1
612simpleplan13
aw so bittersweet especially that end.. it's funny normally you hate ppl who plie, but this piece makes you feel bad for them

aw so bittersweet especially that end.. it's funny normally you hate ppl who plie, but this piece makes you feel bad for them
3/9/2006 c1
241Werewolf Nighteyes
I know how this feels. It's depressing how being yourself is never enough for the world to notice you. Great job here.

I know how this feels. It's depressing how being yourself is never enough for the world to notice you. Great job here.
2/21/2006 c1
59S0ulSearching
aww...i like it-I like the story it tells. I know the feeling, when people are talking to this person that is supposed to be you, but it's not. Keep it up.-pammy-

aww...i like it-I like the story it tells. I know the feeling, when people are talking to this person that is supposed to be you, but it's not. Keep it up.-pammy-
2/21/2006 c1
17Ellie Driver
Wow. That is powerful. I really love that. Any certain inspiration? I'd love to be able to write like that... it's amazing... Ami

Wow. That is powerful. I really love that. Any certain inspiration? I'd love to be able to write like that... it's amazing... Ami