for The Feeling of Loss2/23/2006 c1 
1Syrins
I can't even begin to explain how much I enjoyed this poem. I've never read anything like it, thoroughly constructed under dark circumstances. I like how every last word was the beginning to a new line, and every line questioned everything without fail to realize how much you loved your girlfriend. Well done.
1SyrinsI can't even begin to explain how much I enjoyed this poem. I've never read anything like it, thoroughly constructed under dark circumstances. I like how every last word was the beginning to a new line, and every line questioned everything without fail to realize how much you loved your girlfriend. Well done.
2/23/2006 c1 15Lauren Wolfe
Lovely poem...good, good style too...great depiction of the emotion you have put forth...all in all, wonderful job! Keep it up!^^
15Lauren WolfeLovely poem...good, good style too...great depiction of the emotion you have put forth...all in all, wonderful job! Keep it up!^^