for If2/23/2006 c1 
5Drops of Jewpiter
overall it was very good, but sometimes it seems that you're trying too hard to rhyme a certain line. as long as it flows, you don't need to make it rhyme perfectly. i really like the line 'if you ever finda new girl, tell her something else than 'no''good work.~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpiteroverall it was very good, but sometimes it seems that you're trying too hard to rhyme a certain line. as long as it flows, you don't need to make it rhyme perfectly. i really like the line 'if you ever finda new girl, tell her something else than 'no''good work.~dropsofjewpiter~