for Artist's Kiss2/25/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
love the line: I’m the canvas in an art that leaves me speechless. total perfection. nice work!
love the line: I’m the canvas in an art that leaves me speechless. total perfection. nice work!
2/24/2006 c1 
32Veronika
Well, as a bass player, I was drawn to it; I have to confess that much, way to go choosing a bass over the six-string! :P Now, being serious, I have to say I love the metaphors. (My own little poetic weakness...Heh..._) Much love, keep writing! (Oh, and many thanks for the review!) :D~*Veronika*~
32VeronikaWell, as a bass player, I was drawn to it; I have to confess that much, way to go choosing a bass over the six-string! :P Now, being serious, I have to say I love the metaphors. (My own little poetic weakness...Heh..._) Much love, keep writing! (Oh, and many thanks for the review!) :D~*Veronika*~
2/24/2006 c1 7yarrowicefrost
I really liked it,good job! a very meaningful poem! and thankyou for reviewing my poem:)
7yarrowicefrostI really liked it,good job! a very meaningful poem! and thankyou for reviewing my poem:)
2/23/2006 c1 7angelinastefany
i was just wondering is it a coinsidence that u'r talk about a bass guitar ? ;)
7angelinastefanyi was just wondering is it a coinsidence that u'r talk about a bass guitar ? ;)
2/23/2006 c1 Gyffindor620
This is hot
This is hot