for Reflection2/23/2006 c1 
3beinedhiel
Very nice. I guess everyone feels like they're not understood, like no one really knows what they're really like.
A few corrections: "Eyes so many have told me are endless." I didn't get that at first. I think you need to put a comma after "eyes" and "me." And you have a few problems with "to" and "too"... but other than that, it is very well-written. :)
3beinedhielVery nice. I guess everyone feels like they're not understood, like no one really knows what they're really like.
A few corrections: "Eyes so many have told me are endless." I didn't get that at first. I think you need to put a comma after "eyes" and "me." And you have a few problems with "to" and "too"... but other than that, it is very well-written. :)